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©2009 *JDCONE
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Character created and written by *JDCONE

Pencils and inks by Jade Gonzalez ~JadeGL

Colors by David Montoya~ryuscape

Here's the cover to 'My first day' and I was just wondering which one of them do you guys like?

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:iconxinhun:
I like the left one best

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:iconkillerpine:
Hey, that's a really cool cover. I love all the detail. :)

I def. vote for the middle one. The gradient's more subtle than the one on the left, while still drawing in to emphasize the guy with the red bowtie (bowtie? it's kinda small), whereas the plain white background doesn't really let the eye focus anywhere in particular. Also, the middle grey fits in nicely with the value range on the mice. The white looks too stark; the mice toward the top of the page start getting lost on the really dark bg.

just some thoughts. hope it helps. :)
:iconbishilover4-ever:
The left one is the best :clap:

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:iconevilkuroneko:
First one on the left is the best! C:

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:iconyeahgirl11:
I agree, the middle one does have a good gradient that don't get the background guys lost.:)

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:iconstragan:
since the mouse with the red ribbon seems to be the main character who's pondering while all the other rats are just.. minding their own business, i say the first one

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The far left one has more of a focal point :)

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:iconshweebie:
I like the left one it has more depth to it and on the others the mice towards the back look a bit as if they are floating.

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:iconnahp75:
left one... for me...

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Left! :D

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